you said - I have still involved in my musical activities as a conductor musical director.
Better - I *am* still involved in my musical activities as a conductor musical director.
You said - I've heard I should wear the some formal style/ wear for the year end party.
Better - I've heard I should wear formal wear for the year end party.
You said - So that means I should buy some formal wear which should be very suitable for this kind of party.
Better - So that *means* I should buy some formal wear which should be very suitable for this kind of party.
You said - I think the black is the most formal color I think / I suppose.
Better - I think black is the most formal color.
*FLUENCY*
You said - These shoes.... should not be too expensive.
Better - The shoes should not be too expensive.
hanbok - the traditional attire of the Korean people
clothes [ klohz ]
hanbok - the traditional attire of the Korean people
